Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Song of a broken Heart....


Everything was going smooth and sound,
I was so happy because you were around,
It was a blessing as I was having you,
Till the truth dawn no-where from the blue,
You broke my trust like an insane;
And so I decided;
I am never ever gonna fall in love again,
Never ever,
Never ever,
Never again…………….

I had just started feeling I was in love deeply,
I had started decorating our dreams truly,
But soon I came to know from my friends,
The truth about you and your trends,
Things you said to me here
Were already said to somebody somewhere,
You gave me so much pain,
And so I decided;
I am never ever gonna fall in love again,
Never ever,
Never ever,
Never again…………..

Now I am fed up of your fake emotions,
Your fake smile and notions,
I don’t wanna hear your lies,
I wanna break all our ties,
I will throw you out of my life
My memories and my sights
You played with me cruel games
And so I decided ;
I am never ever gonna fall in love again,
Never ever,
Never ever,
Never again…………..

6 comments:

swapnil said...

again a gud one
really seems painful

and effect of "never ever ..never again " strikes a tune ..good effect .

Avanti Gaidhane said...

THANKS!! Actully it was a song composed by me witha tune thats why i tried to keep it as a song only...

vinzzz said...

Good lines!.. Kinda nervous tinge to it!.. :)

Unknown said...

There is too much passion, too much expression and feeling. Loved it. I'll tell you something.. i have been there and tell you what there is an 'again' but it might not be the same but there is an again. :) Keep posting. Cheers!

...Abhiket+thoughts... said...

Ahh... it really broke the heart.

Seems that someone has hurt you real bad.... nevermind,try again and again ("hmm !! writing word more than once do add to the effect...doesn't it??) you will succeed, for there is still love and hope in this world.

A heart touching poem with simple linguistic.
By the way.... this is the most beautifully decorated blog page i have seen so far.....and has inspired me to endeavor to decorate my own :)

Avanti Gaidhane said...

@Abhiket
hey thanks!! thanks a lot. But writing something doesn't mean that u have to undergo through that.You can also write by feeling someone else feelings.