Wednesday, January 5, 2011

to be alive............

She is in last stage of cancer, battling with God for few seconds so that she can tell him how important he is in her life and want to say bye to him…..

For me I don’t want you to shed tears,
I want you to overcome all your fears,
I want you to be for me strong,
I want you to correct me when I am wrong,
Look in to my eyes and see for you, the desire
Hear my heart, your pain is burning me like fire

I am trapped in your love hive
I just need
I just need
I just need
YOUR LOVE
To be alive………

Time passing by very fast ,like sand
it’s slipping away from my hand,
But my soul be always be there for you,
Even though seconds remaining for my existence are few;

You will feel me even when I am gone
You will smell me when roses worn
You will see me in your dreams
I will flow in your blood like stream;

I am trapped in your love hive
I just need
I just need
I just need
YOUR LOVE
To be alive………

Happy and content I am closing my eyes
That I was part of you and will always be
Even while saying my byes;
I just ask one thing to my God,
Let me be part of him in every life , oh Lord!
We will be together forever and ever and ever
Say bye to me with happy memories of ours

I am trapped in your love hive
I just need...............................

and then there is long silence where only one heart beat can be heard!!!!
He standstill, speechless, emotionless, he wnts to cry like child, fight with god for takng away what he loved most but fails to express anything….
Only sound his lips make…..

You will always be in my heart
You will always be my part
Life or death can never tear us apart,
Our love is boundless, limitless, timeless
I will again marry you in next life, be ready in your white dress,
I am trapped in your love hive
I just need
I just need
I just need
YOUR LOVELY MEMORIES
To be alive………

7 comments:

Kay.desmo said...

thats ingenious, enthralling & hurtful..Its hurts n so i say its well written...Hats off to u...Simply fabulous....

swapnil said...

u really created a wonderful effect by these lines "i just need, i just need (x3) ..."
toooo good :D

and specially the line "i'm trapped in love hive " what a thought !!

..i'm actually out of words to praise u for this :) :)

...Abhiket+thoughts... said...

Great one....one of the best u have written so far....i m a bit inarticulate in describing my feelings after i read this.....emotional and heart touching...or in short "mast"

Umesh Tulshiramji Kumbhalkar said...
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Anonymous said...

Awesome emotions and
heart touch lines.

Sagar Parab said...

Hidden Talent Avanti...
Proud of you dude.. Mask aahe poetry.. Ek number...

Sagar Parab said...

Hidden Talent Avanti...
Proud of you dude.. Mask aahe poetry.. Ek number...