Tear they shed ,
Cry they made ,
Each second spend ,
In search of shed
Hands they lay
On food we call stale
Believing it heaven
What actually is hell
No aim no love
No choice, no passion
To live one more day
Is their only mission
To fight for their right
Don’t have sword
But they have excess
Faith in GOD
Their prayers are unheard
Many dues unpaid
We value a stone but not
The blood they shed
For them each day
Is a new struggle
But for us each day
We buy new goggle(s)
They fight each second
For their dear life
They live each day
As balancing a knife
Sparse are the opportunities to study
As night is dark their future
But even we get a chance
We tend to bunk the lectures
They have dream
But no way to fulfill
We have every thing
But no dreams n strong will
Sometimes I think why I am on side ‘WE’
I should have been on side ‘THEY’
Then I would have understood
In better mode life’s way
Cry they made ,
Each second spend ,
In search of shed
Hands they lay
On food we call stale
Believing it heaven
What actually is hell
No aim no love
No choice, no passion
To live one more day
Is their only mission
To fight for their right
Don’t have sword
But they have excess
Faith in GOD
Their prayers are unheard
Many dues unpaid
We value a stone but not
The blood they shed
For them each day
Is a new struggle
But for us each day
We buy new goggle(s)
They fight each second
For their dear life
They live each day
As balancing a knife
Sparse are the opportunities to study
As night is dark their future
But even we get a chance
We tend to bunk the lectures
They have dream
But no way to fulfill
We have every thing
But no dreams n strong will
Sometimes I think why I am on side ‘WE’
I should have been on side ‘THEY’
Then I would have understood
In better mode life’s way
10 comments:
That is beautiful. Simply beautiful. Well done.
i look beyond sight
and a thought behind the mind ..
truly brilliant !!
Thanks a lot. Thats really encouraging.
awesum poem my dear sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it has really opened ma eyes.................................................................a bit..
But for us each day
We buy new goggle(s....
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That sounded very awkward. Do not force in rhymes just for the sake of it. A few better rhymes i can suggest are snuggle, juggle etc.
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Anyways a decent write. Was pleasantly surprised seeing a fellow PCE-an on Indian Amateur Writers. Which year and branch you in?
Hey thanks for the suggestion.Will surely try to follow it.Actually i used the word goggles bcoz i thought it can b easily related n well i was lacking with thw rhyme...also..
Beautiful. I like your theme too.
Girl, i liked your poems.
And I think that nobody deserves to be on side 'they', 'cause it's a sad reality, but some people could to open the eyes and see not just 'WE' in the world. Is necessary look the other side.
Every line you draft. Every Word You Select.. Is Awesome...
Shows the way you think; shows the way you see the world.. Shows the way your belonging to the emotional senses and a balanced materialistic Approach.
portrayed the difference between the two worlds in this one world..beautiful..congrats..
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